The Weekends
The Weekends.
On the weekend me and my sister had a party to go to. My sister went on Saturday and I went on Sunday. I went to tram park and my sister went to the lagoon pool. It was fun because I like going to parties cause I got to go for 1 hour and 60 seconds but my sister went for 1 and a half when my sister went to Miracle's party me and my mum and and my Nana we went to farmers and the warehouse. when I was at the party my mum dad sister went to go and buy some plants THE END
Hi there I think that you should make it longer and add more information into your story and i think it is good.
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