the secret cave
The secret cave
Chapter 1:The amazing find
One day the three sisters Inayah,Lily,Maddie were playing in their secret hideout the farm's old shed . Then Inayah spotted something suspicious a cave that had never been there before. She knew it because they were born in that farm yard and Inayah wanted to explore it. Inayah told Maddie and Lily and they both agreed on exploring that mysterious cave.They all got their horses. Inayah's horse Rose , Maddie's horse Anna and lily's horse Ashleigh. They also packed some vegetables from the farm yard and took a deep breathe and went into the cave. They all turned on there flashlight and that is when lily spotted something amazing: dinosaur fossils.
Chapter 2:Ouch
She showed them to Maddie and Inayah they looked amazing so they decided to take pictures of them and go further on in the cave.It got darker and darker. That is when Maddie fell off her horse. " Oh no"! said lily and Inayah together. Maddie had a sore ankle. Inayah saw a cast in her bag and it fitted Maddie's ankle. To make sure Maddie will not fall of her horse again, Lily hooked Anna to Ashleigh and safely transferred Maddie onto Ashleigh.
Chapter 3:The small hole
As they went deeper into the tunnel Inayah saw coins on the she told maddie and Lily and they decided we should follow it soon they came to a little big enough for the girls to fit through but they had to leave the horses behind, but there was a problem Maddie could not walk with a sore a ankle. So they asked Maddie how she feels and she said even worst.
Chapter 4:The fairy
Suddenly a voice came from behind us and it was a little fairy and it said your father came in this cave a long time ago and badly hurt just like Maddie and if he finds out he will be very disappointed.There is one way of letting not letting your father know is the gold flower find it in the star's and if you choose correct you will receive the gold flower.
Chapter 5: The one who goes ahead
There is one more thing one of you must stay behind now quickly decide. I should stay behind ouch said maddie. Okay said Lily and Inayah together. Now Inayah and Lily went in front they. Now remember just a little bit more walking and one more of you has to stay behind so decide quickly. I think you should go said Lily to Inayah. No I think you should go said Inayah to lily. Rock paper scissors. Lily wins she has to go.
Chapter 6: The golden flower.
Now Lily your sisters have chosen you but the question is will you make the right choice said the fairy. I hope so said Lily.So do you know your stars properly. Not really said Lily to the fairy. So you have to find the southern cross. Oh the southern cross I see that every night said Lily.This will be harder because every single star is in this sky. Is it that one. Look something is falling from the sky it is the golden flower. Yes said lily.
Chapter 7:The ride home
Lily and Inayah raced back to maddie and quickly said we found the golden flower but maddie was already healed ah this is magic. Oh No said lily it is nearly dinner time. They rushed home. Ah we made it just in time. Oh good you girls are back time for dinner. They kept the secret all to themselves for ever.
The End
By Inayah
Kia ora Inayah, The writing you did was good the information you added was good and also the detail. By Kush
ReplyDeleteDid you proof read your writing I can see some mistakes?
Hi Inayah I really like your story, But what happens to the dad?
ReplyDeleteBy: Parisa
Wow, I like your secret cave story. I liked the part about the dinosaur fossils in your story.But why did you want to write about the secret cave.?
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