Explanation Writing
WALHT: communicate why something is important (Explanation)
Why do children learn to swim
This explanation is about why children need to do swimming. Here is Four reasons why...
My first reason it is important to swim is so you get exercise. If you don't get exercise you will feel sore pane somewhere in your body. For example, your back could start hurting. Exercise also helps you to get stronger and then you can carry things.
My second reason it is important to swim is to have swimming lessons so then you won't drown. So if you don,t do swimming lesson you will have to swim with someone and would have to swim somewhere where there's life guards. You also learn skills of swimming so if you are tied you can just float on your back
My third reason it is important to learn to swim is if a wild animal is chasing you. You would need to get to safety.this is important so then a wild Animal won't kill you You could jump in the water because cats like lions don't like to go in the water and you could swim to safety.
My last reason is it is important to learn to swim to have fun.It is fun to swim because you can splash around at each other and look under the water at the fish and diffrent shells For example, if You don,t want to swim then all the time when your friends want to go hung out at the sea or go to the swimming pools you can't go because you can't swim. They might laugh at you as well.
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Tips:
Paragraph titles: (How you have done it)
Exercise
Lessons/Drowning
An animal chasing you/being able to swim to safety.
Having fun with friends/ hanging out
Paragraph titles: (The way the plan was)
Fun - Join in when you play with friends/swimming with sea animals.
Safety - fall off a boat - swimming skills/drown.
Exercise - full body exercise/helps with sport
Reflect - look a the ideas highlighted in green. For each small idea e.g 'full body exercise' will have it's on paragraphing and 'helps with sports will have it's own paragraph. Even though they are under the same sub-title. Look at my writing if you don't understand what i'm saying.
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