Writing - By Natasha
Nightmare
Once upon a time,
There lived a little girl in a small house with her mother and father. Her name was Emily. Emily's father and mother's names were Bob and Emma. One night Emily watched a scary movie with her mother and father. She was so tired she decided to go to bed early. Emily fell asleep straight away. Emily dreamed of war, she was having a nightmare!
Bombs exploding, guns shooting at everyone and people running for their lives. Emily ran! She followed the others into a tank. The tank was pitch dark though she could still hear the Sound of guns firing and people shouting. Suddenly she heard a ringing sound that would not stop. Emily woke up and realised it was her alarm clock. she was so relieved to know it was just a dream!
The End
By Natasha
Hi Natasha you have a very nice story! One of the things I liked about your story is how you chose the names, for an example when you said that emily's parents names are bob and emma for Mrs Hansen and Mr Miller. Another one of my favourite parts is all the things you thought of for your story, It's very short but, really good. Where did you get the name ‘Emily’ from?
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