Aixa's Autumn leaves poem
Autumn leaves
Autumn trees with autumn leaves,
Gold, brown and yellow,
Twirling and whirling all around making piles of leaves
Made by Aixa 🙂
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Hi Aixa,
ReplyDeleteWhat I like about your comment is that you made your writing stick to the topic. Some more information/words is maybe try to think of some words that stay with the writing like dancing or prancing all around. One of my poems is similar to yours. Otherwise your writing was amazing, keep up the good work!