First Try at writing an Explanation.
hi my name is Arav and this is my blog post
Children play xbox because they like games on technology but an excuse is that why can't they play outside because tech is there stuff communicating with friends playing games.
Most children play technology because the like the game in computers but is is on a bigger screen that is a TV .
They like the wireless controller because you don't need to sit next to the console .
The xbox controller has one left thumbstick and one right thumb stick is a little bit higher than the left thumbstick I do not know why but my guess is that they didn't want to copy the PS4 controller.
The PS4 controller has both thumbsticks are strate. PS4 has a bigger consal and they also like the blue or red light on the front part of the controller which tells if you are player two or one.
Player one can chose the game when player two has to wait till the game has started but I think player two is better because you don't need to do anything while player one has to do the work .
over a thousand people play PS4 and same as xbox . there are two xboxes xbox one and xbox three sixty xbox one is the new one xbox
this pece of writing was hard because we had to highlight the writing from the successes criteria
Success Criteria:
- Recount a moment in time
- A hook!
- Different sentence starters
- Transition words
- Paragraphs
- Beginning / middle / end
- Descriptive language - adjectives, similes, onomatopoeia
- Punctuation - commas, exclamation marks, quotation marks, question marks
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