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Hey Carys! I really liked your blog post, I didn’t know you were part Welsh, Sri Lanka and a Kiwi! Talk about culture! Also, I didn’t know you did ALL of those after school activities! Gymnastics, Hip Hop, Scouts, Taekwondo, how do you do it all? Your blog post packed heaps into 12 sentences (around about that anyways)! Thats awesome! Maybe next time though, remember to add capital I’s after a full stop, and speaking about full stops, try to add other punctuation, not just them. Keep it up, Bella :D
Hey Carys!
ReplyDeleteI really liked your blog post, I didn’t know you were part Welsh, Sri Lanka and a Kiwi! Talk about culture! Also, I didn’t know you did ALL of those after school activities! Gymnastics, Hip Hop, Scouts, Taekwondo, how do you do it all? Your blog post packed heaps into 12 sentences (around about that anyways)! Thats awesome! Maybe next time though, remember to add capital I’s after a full stop, and speaking about full stops, try to add other punctuation, not just them.
Keep it up,
Bella :D
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